Sundown Delight

1 year 11 months ago

"Hahahaha, is it mellykill? From cheese?
Well, the scan itself is like that. And i'm still a newbie so i can't get the way how to make archer less 'orange'.
About the thing rin held..it's a book actually. Yeah, guess i'll add something to it.
Any other suggestions?? I'll soon back with the revised version.*took a bus to photoshop city*

^^
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pita ten girl wallpaper

1 year 11 months ago

"The part near her head. Like i spotted here:



Well i don't know if this one will be a problem or not. Maybe it's just a small prob though. But i'll fill it in if i were you. Just in case..better safe than sorry, right?? ^^"
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Sundown Delight

1 year 11 months ago

"Woops..i missed those spots. Ohh where's my glasses anyway..i didn't wear them when i make this. *looking for the glasses*.....
AH!! FOUND IT! Finally..the revised version can be updated here:



I fixed the things you spotted, and make the font kinda fade out like Riku3 said.
Whaddya think??

P.S: Sorry for the resolution. Think about fixing it later on. ^^"
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Sundown Delight

1 year 11 months ago

"Okay, guys! This is my latest wall try so tell me is it good or not please. Be honest! I don't care how harsh you will, just spit it out will ya! ^^
Okay, let's see what i have here..



I personally think this' a bit dark. How 'bout you?? ^^
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pita ten girl wallpaper

1 year 11 months ago

"That small white space in the upper part of wall. I'll fill it if i were you."
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autumn wall

1 year 11 months ago

"I'll say i go with the tree version. But you need to make it more 'real' via stock or either add texture. The scan is very clean indeed, no prob with that. Great! ^^
Yeah, the grass indeed is the problem, too much same colors. If you use photoshop (coz i see the brushes here is from photoshop), press F5 to go to brush section, select color dynamics and set the hue option. And how about adding birds in that sky? I personally think orange is better for autumn sky.
The font is no problem, but i think you should put it lower, and add blending options or effects to make it better.
Well, hope that helps! ^^"
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changed wall

1 year 11 months ago

"You know dear, you seem to be putting the text behind the clouds and it isn't totally do any good to my eyes. And the BIRDS!! Sheesh, they are too big to me. I personally love tiny birds that flew in groups. Ah, and you see.. the outline of this scan is too 'rough' for a 'soft' bg like this. Make it softer via blur (tool if you use photoshop anway). And i noticed no sig there. Please, sig is essential to mark your work, and i know you know it very well. ^^
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Revised H.I.M. (BLEACH) Wall

1 year 11 months ago

"Euhh..i would like to say that your bg is kind of problematic. It's good, but i can't say that it's OK. How abput adding splatter brush? Well this is just me, you know..
ANd to fit the bg better, please make your scan's outline softer, because it seems too..'rough' for me. Blur tool will do the trick. Your font is fine though.

GL"
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HI! I new here ! Hope can get along with everyone! ^^

1 year 11 months ago

"Hello, hello!! ^^
Welcome to AP! hope you have fun here.
Whenever you need help, either read FAQ or ask the other member.
I always ready whenever you got questions! ><
If you wanna add me, feel free! And contact me back via PM or comment on my userpage so i can add you.
Anyway, wlecome and hope you fit in well! :D
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pita ten girl wallpaper

1 year 11 months ago

"Yeah. Your scan is like blending perfectly altogether with the bg, and it's no good to me. And you know..this wall is too bright. My friend ever told me that she was rejected because making the wall too bright. May want to put less saturation on it. And the flower brush on her hair near the ribbon is getting on the scan. Also..i'll fill the empty parts around her just a little bit more. Your choice of font is also kind of bothering me. Maybe it is just me, but i'll change it if i were you. And that line after the 'e' of smile and before 's' of see aren't very necessary.
Gosh..you forgot your sig too. ^^"
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changed bg of crystal wall

1 year 11 months ago

"Yea actually i felt i ever said this on your last thread: "I'm surprised with the size of your file". Heh..^^
Uhm..you see that uhh..trunk(??) looks so weird. Do something on it, like filters or such. Stocks are also a good choice. And that sky please...so blank, so plain. I see no efforts there. Try to put clouds, birds, sun, something like those..
And if it was autumn (look at the leaves), make sense that it's an autumn. I would try something like orange-ish sky.
Good luck on that though. ^^"
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My 1st 2 wallpapers!

1 year 11 months ago

"*sigh* terrible. I don't mean to offense you but that's what i think. Yeah i agree totally with mellykill said, too much filters (i see you use angled strokes. Or is it crosshatch? Well whatever) ghosting won't do and your 'ghost' is too small! At least use bigger 'ghost' if you really mean to ghosting. But i don't think the mods here will accept a wall with just ghosting bg. So better change it or if you don't want to, work on another wall and leave this one alone because it won't work.
The text please..i don't understand japanese."
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beutiful girl prt.3

1 year 11 months ago

"Whoops..the filesize is too big! Use the Save for Web setting. ^^
Okay, at least better than first or second thread you made here. Quite an improvement. But the snowflakes is the thing that bothered me. Try to rotate the canvas all over to get various shape of snowflake even if you just using one brush."
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Do you close your eyes when you shampoo your hair?

1 year 11 months ago

"I don't. I have a soft shampoo that it won't hurt your eyes even though you don't close it."
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What kind of person do you hate?

1 year 11 months ago

"I hate person that made me wait for so long "
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saiyuki..wallpaper contest..

1 year 11 months ago

"Uhh..how should i put it?? Rukawa11 was right about the bg because i don't think it'll fit. Why don't try something like vector brushes or grunge? Or blood splatter? Well just a suggestion, though.
And you see.. that font is bothering me. If you decided to go with grungy bg, check this site and look for the font 'trashed'. I guess it'll fit.
Whoops! You forgot your sig! ^^"
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Greatings!

1 year 11 months ago

"Hello. Welcome to AP. Hope you have fun here because i do. Hehehehee..
If you wanna add me to your friends list, i'll be happy to add you back. Just send me PM or give comments on my userpage.^^
ANyway, welcome! Hope you fit well! ^^"
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I like Alice Academy!!! who else like it???

1 year 11 months ago

"I like this one because it seemed to be so 'innocent' yet so interesting to follow. And the other thing that sitcked me to this anime is because of Tsubasa!! Kyaaa! ><"
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Sky Guardian

1 year 11 months ago

"Okay, this is the latest revision. I added birds if you mentioned it. And about that cross..the horizontal line is not the part of the scan, if you think it's bad..OK..i removed it here:



Whaddya think?? ^^"
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Sky Guardian

1 year 11 months ago

"Okay, darker, right? Is it like this one??
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Sky Guardian

1 year 11 months ago

"Okay, this is my newest work. I tried really hard on this one that it took 1 night sleep,sheesh!
Hope it worth the time. OK..i worked on two versions here.
This:



And this:



Which one do you like the best?? And i would really, really love to know is this one ready for submission or not. Please tell me your spesific comment. ^^"
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