NHK Kouhaku Artist Roster

1 year 6 months ago

"Red team is the very best...!!:.._.-..

ayumi. kouda. boa. bonnie. mika. angela aki. ... is tooo much..."
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Roy Mustang FullMetal Alchemist

1 year 7 months ago

"I think the idea is great...

the combination of figure and bg is perfect.
roy on b&w- well done! that make a difference whitin the others fma wall.
add personality to the figure of roy.

- problem. vectorize. and fiz the lines of the draw. principal on hear
the fonts.. fixit.. they are smooth... and blurred.. make it real.. not ghost text.
the gigantic rectangle (where say your nick and others...)
maybe.. push down... not so big...

this paper is one of the better that i see..on the site.. but .. fixit..

and you go accepted."
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erm,why did it get rejected?

1 year 7 months ago

"Mm i think that the problems are 2 or 3.

the more impresive error .. is the circles on the left top corner. all others are centres on the axes.. but the left one not... this problem make a good wall..into a rejected wall..

the bg is recherged .. i think you need to erase the ... radioactive icon.

the blue in all the wall is fine.. cause.. are monocromatic.. and the stars they add a fresh touch to the all blue.

also the violet thing's.

that's all ... maybe you will be acepted ..

mosh"
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Gensho Sugiyama wall [Update 2!]

1 year 7 months ago

"The bg is too recharged. try to make something with the base that you show on the first attemp.

the lines of the character, on the card need a little blur..

the hat is too bright

the bg need a little more work.. the base is good but very hard-

play with the bg.. it fits with the character...but need work.. "
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Rurouni Kenshin Wallpaper

1 year 7 months ago

"The scan is good. but the white in the silouette.. mmmm.. remove it.
the images in the bg. are screens. and.. they are pixelated.. !
the ninja star if is that.. are on the middle of the head of the bg kenshin. wrong.

try to find a way to vetor the images.. maybe..the screen behind with pensative kenshin works with the wall.

but you need to vectorize it.

use a brush and play with that to make a more...personalized ray.

the font of the text change it. don't belong to the wall.
and is too big.

this ap. will be rejected.

be more creative.. and take more time with your idea..

mosh"
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Is this any good? [Update]

1 year 7 months ago

"In comunion with all the boys.. yeah the sky.. is overloaded. the second image is the most i like.
maybe erase stars the center is overcharged .. and the novas..
the girl is a little...bright.. the factions of the face.. are difficult to see.
reduce the bright a little.. works good with the moon.. very well done! ^^
the grass..
with that i suggest.. play with brushes.. don't use a grass brush.. play with forms... and the effects of ths ps. work it...
and don't do it so long.. is too much i think..
the font i good.. is serius.. but the place is wrong
corners are always the best choice.-

the colors in general are good, the scan is good.
i like what you do with the effect near the moon...

the second wall are my choice. whit some canges.


mosh.

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First Original Art

1 year 8 months ago

"http://www.imageshack.us/"
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1st Wallie

1 year 8 months ago

"Extract. means.. you scan an image.. and with a tool make a vertor.. take the contour lines ... and coloring by youself..

the image is confuse.. and poor..

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Continuation of my Fushigi Yuugi Wall

1 year 8 months ago

"I like it but the...<= side need's blur... and the hair is a little blurry.. "
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Rock Lee: First Wallpaper. [Is it ready?]

1 year 8 months ago

"Is too grainny.., and in the leg.. he has a rare scratch or something... the teeth.. have something..but don't know what.. is weird..

the bg ...worked more."
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Its a Full metal christmas

1 year 8 months ago

"I think the central image is good.. the scan is not clean..but i good on this way.

the bg i poor.. add snow.. or draw classic snow.. on cartoons. because the wall is make in the cartoon form.

make better the font. and not underline or striketrough

make a worked text.

don't ungry for the comments.. some peple tried to help u.. i fight with -100 papers.. and is hard.

this section is for help.

and everybody tri to help."
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Naruto wall

1 year 8 months ago

"The central character is ... a little... poor.. the image... don't belong to the other characters pose.

and the bg is bad.. isn't belong to the idea of the wall.

is out of place.

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Spiral wallpaper, take a peek...

1 year 8 months ago

"I don't like the bricks.. and the central image.. is a little...poor."
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Check it out! I'm imrpoving! ><

1 year 8 months ago

"That wall is really good... i like it...

only blur a little the bg ..

or not.. it's good don't think you go rejected."
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editted wall

1 year 8 months ago

"Polaroid is fine... maybe more realistic...

the text... that font don like me. isn't good. "
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My second wallpaper..

1 year 8 months ago

"The clouds it's too bright.. make it .. whit a global blue all in the sky.

more work on chii. make it more real..


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FMA station of the train

1 year 8 months ago

"I like it... it have a good resolution.. on the bg. it's a very good work
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New FMA Wall

1 year 8 months ago

"It's simple... but i like it...

maybe you need to work a little more the girls.

some effect... to get them more precence"
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naruto

1 year 8 months ago

"The image in general does't likes me.

you have work much more the font. is to plane. it's licks grace.

whit other font.. maybe something more cheer... more.. happy.

or totally the opossed, but whit more presence, but without clearing protagonism to the image




mosh.AB"
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I've been rejected

1 year 8 months ago

"I think it's ready.

the changes works..

the little details are very important. you must remember them in next works. and apply the experience. to improve your skills. "
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Help

1 year 8 months ago

"It's difficult to see the image.

it's so saturated.

the bg does not fit whit chii.

it's so pink for every place. prove whit other colors



mosh.AB"
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Suggestions for a Kurogane from Tsubasa (TRC) Wall

1 year 8 months ago

"It's pop art style.

not bad.. but... don't look's like a wallp.

if you treat the images separated.. try to focus in one part of this big image.




[mosh.AB]"
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Range Murata >.> Rejected :(

1 year 8 months ago

"I think that the wall need much more wrok.. in the bg.. is too much... mmm 2d. treat the bg that he looks like 3d. or more treated 2d.
needs more presence.
the central image is very nice.
much work on it. well done..^^

the central problem is the bg.




[mosh.AB]"
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Strangest Openings

1 year 8 months ago

"The op of honey and clover.. it's a tribute... to food..!! :P it's so weird.
sumomomo momomo.. crazy..
nhk ni youkoso. it's a little.. strange. the ed. it's so crazy.
shiin chan.

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