Time Of Dying

1 year 1 month ago

"Hi' nice wall shot' these wall has a very nice side view. i really like it. but, though i feel that the wall isn't perfect yet. eey.. yupe' i think that the wall is still too blur. can you feel it? not the whole face, you did a great job at his eyeballs, mouth, nose hair. except those part, why don't you clean it up. ex: his skin, and the part that shaded with shadow. furthermore, that's this weird stuff on his face. eerr. how to said, the part where scratching his face around. haiz~ just look the thumbnail below so that you understand what i meant.



legend: for the blue part, is what i meant from the part which have very scratchy line around his face. as for the green part, is what i meant from the part that's blur and looks not clean enough. that's all the part that i can critics in this wallpaper. err, as for the text of course. i like the cross things and the small writings on it, though i don't like those big "DYING MAN'S" & "LAST WISH" writings. look awesome but it's kinda not suit. lol~ i suggest you change it into a more luxury feels of text on it. well, this part you think which better yourself. hehe. anyway, no offense and as always. good luck for the wall. adios~

regards, sen

P.S. i like Kira more than L. lol. xD
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kawaii! ^^,

1 year 1 month ago

"Yo~
first of all, i never use paintshop pro. xD i'm here just to tell you the little weird stuff, that i found out myself. i don't know this anime actually. haha. well whatever anime this is, the concept of this wallpaper is there already. but, because of you adding the texture above it. it looks poor. don't know that it's a texture above it? but when you put it, the lineart seems broken. looks very stiffy. i suggest you remove the texture. in this wall i prefer the most of the colors. it looks very NICE. i kinda like the way you blend everything. sorry if my critics goes wrong. xD no offense. as always " GOOD LUCK"

regards, sen

P.S. don't forget the sig of yours."
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Rozen Maiden Wallpaper - Rose Symphony

1 year 1 month ago

"
seems that you're curious in anybody to commenting your wall' well, let me try to comment you. actually, i don't really suit to this kind of girly wall. anyway, the scan is great' you colored it with quite a talent" (i can't do that myself. ) but there's several small mistake there.. while i look closely to the scan.. ee.. on the edge of the scan.. ee.. what i mean is the lineart of the scan is broken in some parts. below is the example i make from what i mean just now.. so that you understand it clearly..



yupe, you can see that it's quite crumpy isn't it? there's several other parts that have the same thing.. try to trace it yourself~ other than that.. for the BG it's too blur.. even though looks quite nice with the scan. furthermore the text, it looks clumsy. i think you better put the beautiful handwriting better than that.. ee.. something like "monotype corsiva".. that's compatible with her traditional english style most. (what the hell.. ) i think that's all from me.. no offense' just follow your own feeling anyway.

jya naa~

regards, sen"
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Air Gear wall. The Wing Road

1 year 3 months ago

"Hi all" this is my 2nd wall trial~ need all of you best suggestion" check the website below to view the wall~

Air Gear "The Wing Road"

very appreciate.

regards, sen"
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First wallpaper submission

1 year 3 months ago

"Yo"

about the distracting black color strings~
the black string distracts the other colors in the wall~ (well, for me actually~ xD) the black color appearance is too high/deep, so that it decrease the others appearance~ simply said that it didn't fit in the wall~

about the extraction and cleaning, they're bad~ (as what Shige-kun said above~) about ICHIGO leg~ (it was the feet part actually ~ sorry, my mistake.. :P) look at all the white stuff" (is that intentional too? | )

as for the grungy brushes~ yeah" it's up to you, i just gave you how i like the wall looks like~ doesn't mean you have to follow xD`

anyway, good luck for the wall"

regards, sen


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Finally, something from White Wolfe Warrior

1 year 3 months ago

"Yo"
eee~ 1st of all, this is quite a nice wallpaper for a 1st timer" but hey, there's several part i would like to critique"

1st part,
the whole wall looks crumpy~ except for the text" (look at the BG/left side!{is that a filter?!} the scan too! especially the paper" argh!) you better save the JPG/PNG files with maximum quality. to handle the wall with best quality! (quality is the main priority~ xD)

2nd part,
scan is the most important part in doing wall job, yours didn't work out yet" the line at the edge of the whole scan didn't cleared enough. it's so unreliable to see it" you need to make it cleared enough. (make the line blacker.. you know what i mean?) including, the papers flying around.. (is it connected with the scan or with separated layers?) that's really distracting the view~ (especially the one near the text, i looks more like tofu? haha") you better re-extract all of them~

3rd part,
The BG" (OMG~ looks distracting & confusing in my eyes~) the blur stuff at the left of the wall behind the text, wipe out the original image" looks weird~ better remake the BG~ or even re-coloring the BG~ (come on~ that looks super hazy~)

4th part,
eee~ the text though, looks too simple~ (but that's okay if you want it just like that.. up to you~) better put some creativity in the text like mm.. bundle every text randomly with thin text in capitally, and mm.. used glow effect in it with different (but almost same..) color alteration~ (haha! that's my suggestion.. xD)

5th part,
your signature please.. as the rule given in AP~ you must stated your name or sig that could showing you as the real wall creator~ without that, probably 90% disapproved from gallery~ (your AP name "whitewolfewarrior" right?)

other than that, looks COOL as a 1st timer~

no offense,

good luck! keep rock'n~
jya"

regards, sen
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First wallpaper submission

1 year 3 months ago

"Yo"
from the 1st time saw your wall" i think "incredible!" but hmm~ after zooming the wall, there's several part i would like to critique,

1st part,
the black string under the two scan.. that really distract the color. and hmm.. the string is to blur for me to see it.. so, its better vanished.

2nd part,
one of the most important part in doing wall, the scan~ Ichigo and Orihime didn't extracted and cleaned well. both inside the photo and outside~ better re-extract them. (LOOK AT ICHIGO LEG! argh!)

3rd part,
under Orihime scan body, there's something white that shut her body off. if you really want to shut it off. its better look cleared enough. otherwise it looks distracting~ (it looks better if Orihime ponytail went out.. haha")

4th part,
your signature please.. as the rule given in AP~ you must stated your name or sig that could showing you as the real wall creator~ without that, probably 95% disapproved from gallery~ (your AP name "4fifteen" right?)

other than that looks INCREDIBLE as the 1st timer~
well, good luck! keep rock'n!

no offense"

regards, sen"
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a new computer

1 year 3 months ago

"Yo"
eee~ for me" (although i'm using notebook/laptop )
it's best using PC(desktop) if you really want to have a great confidence & quality in doing your job. cause PC can't be death that fast.. XD its hard drive condition is much better on working behind your desktop.. and hmm.. PC hardware can be easily changed or repaired, also it can be bought with cheaper price~

in other hands,

Laptop have a sensitive behaviour, it's hard drive can't be easily agony if you didn't look after it at most time. and hmm.. it used battery power too. so sometimes you must pause your work, when the battery off power.. (without the charger with you.. maybe.. |) the reparation and hardware upgrade price is very expensive either. best of all laptop wins on its small condition, it can't be take anywhere you like. XD

no offense. (and hmm.. sorry if i wrong~ )
jya~

regards, sen"
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First Hana Kimi wall submission

1 year 3 months ago

"Hi~
good job for the 1st timer"
i like the middle stuff"
but the right upper corner C4D stuff didn't work out as i look at it.
and for a bit suggestion put a text near the middle stuff.
put it at the low left side of the middle stuff with nice text alteration.
of course with connected meaning with the wall"
that's all from me~ no offense"

jya nee~

regards, sen"
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One of my first wallpapers (Wild ARMs, Rudy)

1 year 4 months ago

"Wow' great job'
simple.. but i like it"
for suggestion..
i think you should just make all the scan inside a bit more clear"
so that everyone can see it easily~
what i mean is make the edge of the two scan inside fully lined with darker color~
no offense, just follow if you think you should~
good luck'

regards, sen
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Full Metal Alchemist

1 year 4 months ago

"
actually i never done any vectoring. XD
from the way i see, the vectoring of Ed hasn't finished~
it looks good for an image.
otherwise for a wall, on my opinion it still didn't work out~
maybe, you should restructuring the scan..
make the edge of the scan more fully lined'
for the BG, simple~
make something more interesting to see by others'
something that only you ever made~
don't follow my critics if you don't seems to like it~
no offense~
good luck for the wall~

regards, sen
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Karekano wall

1 year 4 months ago

"Yo~
i think your design went quite well'
just one critics from me'
scan..
didn't well extracted' (a bit blur)
good luck.

jya~

P.S. follow dixneuf advice'"
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Death Note Wall...>_<

1 year 5 months ago

"
i like the way you vectoring Ryuzaki("L")~
(i'm hyper newbie in vectoring.)
the book and the biscuits make a nice combining with the scan~
but.. for me..
the main false is~ extraction'
still show the rigid stuff at the edge of the scan~
not all of the edge, but there's some part'
ex: eyes, hands, shadow on his shirt, etc~
for a bit suggestion,
by the book: it seems to be very slight, make it more thick by showing some papers
maybe~
by the plate of biscuits: good job' XD
if the simpleness, actually i prefer that better~
but i don't know how's the mod taste's like.
just follow the most opinion i think..'
anyway..
sorry if my critiques seems to be bothering you'
good luck for the wall~

jya~

regards, sen
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Disgaea : Hour of Darkness wall' help.. T_T

1 year 5 months ago

"
any AP members willing to help criticizing.
continue to website below.

click here

arigato

jya~

regards, sen
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Disgaea : Hour of Darkness wall' help.. T_T

1 year 5 months ago

"
thanks for all the critics given.

click below for session zero gallery'
click here
if didn't worked.. (sometimes AP turns out an error)

click below, this is where i upload in imageshack
click here

check my old walls below


anyway..
jrpjnoyako~
i've increase the saturation for the middle chara..
not that much but, i can see the changes already..
(very please to hear that it's ready to submit.)

Yuki~
about the grass, i remake them using other tools(magnetic lasso tool)
and minimize the blurry stuff..
(vectoring, not quite understand it yet.. still learning)
and the chara, i check all parts of it, and try to reduce the white stuff..
i afraid i miss some of the part.. sometimes i could have mistaken~

Enders~
i don't quite understand bout' the texture..
but, about the grass i manage the details already..

still don't know if it's worked out or not..


how is it? do it get worser?

jya'

regards, sen
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Disgaea : Hour of Darkness wall' help.. T_T

1 year 5 months ago

"
anyhow' thanks for all your comments'

click below for session zero gallery'
click here
if didn't worked.. (sometimes AP turns out an error)

click below, this is where i upload in imageshack
click here

Yuki~
the grass i intentionally using gradient to it' so that it match the sky'
(the darker sky begin from the right side, so i make the same way for the grass)

logon55~
about the grass behind and infront the scan'
i make the grass not just infront the scan, but the land also higher than the scan'
so it shows like they came from under to top'

anyway, about the other same critics..

about the extraction'
jrpjnoyako~
you said the scan is okay but it looks too bright'
so i minimize the saturation of all scan..
and i think i get rid of the white stuff of the outline of some chara already..

about the grass'
i don't really understand what vector is..

so.. i cut off the blur grass before'
and draw this one myself.. using lasso tool~
also blur it just a bit so that it don't look too stiff..

from all above, i still don't know am i doing the right way..


well, what do you thing?
ready to submit? or it even get worser~

jya~

regards, sen"
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Disgaea : Hour of Darkness wall' help.. T_T

1 year 5 months ago

"
first of all, thanks for the comment' (clarings & jrpjonako)
that's true.. my scan didn't extracted and cleaned well'
so.. i think i fixed it already, using jrpjyonako tutor above'
very appreciate for your help'

click below for session zero gallery'
click here
if didn't worked.. (sometimes AP turns out an error)

click below, this is where i upload in imageshack
click here


now, is the extraction gone well?
i change one chara from it'
it's sinner, i change it to gunner'
(cause the way sinner stand didn't fit the land)
about the grass'
i try to make it simpler'
just using gradient tool in it' (to make it more cartoon feature)
i don't know if it's right..

the cloud'
i try to fix the kinda look messed up part'

what do you thing?

jya'

regards, sen~"
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Disgaea : Hour of Darkness wall' help.. T_T

1 year 5 months ago

"
this is my 2nd wall..
Disgaea : Hour of Darkness
still newbie here.


click for the wall, below..
CLICK HERE'

anyway..
the wall show their desire to battle.
i called the title "Let's Battle!"
all the chara inside is separated'
the main chara is Laharl, Etna and Flonne (the middle kid & two girls beside him)
the others is Lord Laharl Guardian..
ex: Thief, Healer, Archer, Ninja, Prinny(Penguin), Sinner, Heavy Knight, Kunoichi,
Magician, Warrior and Witch.

i waste my time a lot while combining all the scan together + cleaning & extraction,
and.. i do the BG by brushing the cloud and edit it with a bit of shadow including
opacity minimalism..
the sky i do it using gradient tool' and..
the grass i do it using brush tool with color alteration..

i know it's very simple.. but..
i've got no idea else until that'


well.. like usual'
need all your best direction..


jya'

regards, sen~"
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My first Nana wall

1 year 5 months ago

"Hey'
nice simple wall there'
i don't really like the smoke'
too spreading, and small'
also..
i assume that Rukawa11 critics is true either..
the background too empty..
don't really know what the staff taste, is like.. hehe..
for suggestion, put some fit graffiti brush in it'
so keep working hard'
ganbatte'

jya2'

sen~"
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My first wall :) With Zaraki Kenpachi

1 year 5 months ago

"
nice creation there..
i think the tip(top/corner/skin) of your scan didn't clean enough'
for edition..
why don't you put red color by the left bottom corner of your wall'
make it more balance'
and try to put another image/scan inside it too..
hmm..
that's the end of my criticism'
anyway.. Good luck for your 1st wall'

best regards'

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"Real Project" Ergo Proxy

1 year 5 months ago

"
hey'
i like almost every part of your BG'
but.. the scan, that make the wall didn't worked out'
do you really extract/clean the scan?
by just a glance' i could see the blur stuff by it'
and after seeing the 2nd time' i saw the tip(conner) part of the scan still
very stiffy' it's true what you just said by that part'
(look at the chin part of the girl' full size.)
i think AP staff didn't like any single small mistake to pop out' haha'
well, this is not a forcing session'
i'm just suggesting here.. huahua' so..
better flow it with your own feeling'
and once again Good Luck'
i wish for the best improvement too'

adios'

best regards'

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