First wallpaper found!

2 years 7 months ago

"
hi there..
that\'s a nice two hour running wall you know\'
so.. keep your spirit up\'
the 1st thing i like about your wall is the grid stuff back at your BG\'
including the cloudy orange\' excellent..
as for the middle part it seems to be too stiff\'
better smooth it\' and brush a bit modern graffiti\'
as for the text\' i don\'t like it\' hehe..
but.. better follow your own feeling about that part\'
don\'t know how other members could think of\'
also a bit suggestion for the scan\'
the tip(point/top/skin) of the scan body..
not clean enough\' make it a bit blur..
that\'s the end of my criticism\'
hope it worked you out..
anyway.. good luck\'

best regards\'
"
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"Real Project" Ergo Proxy

2 years 7 months ago

"Man' don't know how to say it, but..
this is not a good quality wall'
the main false is the image a bit too blur..
your scan extraction didn't clean enough'
and the ghost face beside the "Ergo Proxy" text..
it's too stiff' i suggest you make it smoother..
you have a nice design in it'
anyway for suggestion..
don't just move on to submit because of hearing someone said they like it..
is that someone really somebody pro in the site?
if no.. better think twice'
if there are about three or four person said something like..
"The wall is great and ready to be submit.."
that time you can move on to submit already'
huahua' well, sorry if my criticism too rude'
and.. Good luck for the improvement'

best regards'"
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Wallpaper help please!

2 years 7 months ago

"Hey'
1st of all, the two girls isn't connected by the same anime right?
("Ah' My Goddess" and "School Rumble" 2 different anime, am i right?)
how could you mix that?
i don't know if it's against rule or not'
but when you submit, which gallery you would put in?
I afraid it's going to make you confused at the end'
anyway..
the scan looks fine'
the BG looks too real' even i saw people sunbathing far away looks like real human'

i suggest you use some filter to make it more sketchy'
the shadow by Yakumo' i feel weird about it..
it's better you put the shadow North-east from her body..
and a bit straight with the beach lot surface'
and including the Goddess' i suggest you put a shadow for her too..
i think that's from me..
good luck for the wall..
"
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2nd wall.. Disgaea'

2 years 7 months ago

" all..
this is my 2nd wall works'
i'm still newbie here' hope it worked out'

check the wallpaper below..
here

this is Laharl(main character of Disgaea) wall..
with widescreen resolution'

i worked on the graffiti for the BG'
include Laharl cleaning..

is the wall have the criteria of a good wall?
i don't really know what kind of wall is this yet..


anyway..
i really need your guidance'

warmest regards'

"
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hello everyone!!

2 years 7 months ago

"Nice to meet you'
Welcome to AP'
"
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Laharl (Disgaea) wall.. still rookie..

2 years 7 months ago

" all..
first of all sorry for the inconvenience cause i'm making a big mistake of BG'
in my wall.. you can check it out here
and anyway.. i'm removing this thread out..
so.. very sorry for the inconvenience..


going to work on my real own creation now'

warmest regards'"
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Ello!

2 years 7 months ago

"
Nice to meet you' THFM'
Welcome to AP'
"
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Another try.

2 years 7 months ago

"Wew' now it seems pretty much fresher than before..
and for the sakes, follow asa01 advices'
very detail explanation there..
agree with the shattered glass effect..
(it looks more like a board')
if you submit now straight away..
i still doubt it will approved'
so.. take your time..
don't need to rush..

once again good luck"
"
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Yoko WP v2.0

2 years 7 months ago

"Yes' the extraction is okay..
the only thing i dislike is..
the background is a bit too dim..
not really fit the scan..
just for a suggestion..
why don't you put, Sun by the sky..
followed by using Outer glow in blending..
so that the wall feels more fresh..
the one you did, looks sorrow..
except your scan.. it works well'
anyway.. good luck'

best regards'
"
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Asuna (Negima) wall'

2 years 7 months ago

"Sorry' i post it two time..
it's happened to be a bit lack just now.. so i double click it'
sorry2'
anyway..
check my wall on the other one..
here..
Asuna (Negima) wall'
thanks' sorry for the inconvenience..

best regards' "
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Another try.

2 years 7 months ago

"First of all..
your english real bad..
need to improve your language for easy conversation..
anyway..
2nd wall better than 1st wall..
it's true.. you've a nice concept there,
but.. i dislike..
the noise, i think you should remove it'
and the color of Ichigo turning into hollow by the background..
somehow it didn't suit..
also the text "Kurosaki Ichigo"..
too simple..
back to you.. be more creative..
well, good luck'

best regards'

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Asuna (Negima) wall'

2 years 7 months ago

"
this is my 2nd wall..


it's Asuna wall.. with simple style..
i worked on a bit lining and coloring..
include designing her little wing there..
plus scan cleaning..
don't know if it's worked out to submit'
need your guidence..

best regards'
"
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Yo new here but not exactly ^_^

2 years 7 months ago

"You found a great place..
Welcome to AP'
nice to meet you Mendics'
"
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Naruto Wallpaper

2 years 7 months ago

"Yup' too grainy..
you must clean it 1st..
aside from that.. i think is a bit to simple..
why don't you put some text inside that suit the image..
anyway.. Good luck'"
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Hi Hi Hi Hi

2 years 7 months ago

" nice to meet you'
welcome to AP'"
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"1st wall is a success' thanks to all your support'

best regards' nod"
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"6th edition'


haiz' after all of the above creation.. i still don't see any clean extraction..T_T
so.. after gaining the clean tutorial by Shinta..
i change my scan to the full body.. and try extract it following the tutorial..
and i finished it' i can see this is the cleanest one from all'
now.. back to the question'
is this the best creation i've got?
thanks for all the comments' very much appreciate'

best regards'
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"5th edition'


how is it?
i change the aura into a bit lighter' and the Rune into a bit grainy..
not too grainy actually.. so that you can see the Hero at 1st..
is it the best creation i've done? or any other comments?..
thanks for your suggestion'

warmest regards'"
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Hello! =)

2 years 7 months ago

"Nice to meet you.. welcome to AP'"
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"Okay2' here's my latest effort on doing it' hope it worked out'
check it out..


so now.. which is the best that worked out for submitting?
best regards'
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"Gaburra' sorry i don't understand your language.. i'm Indonesian Chinese.. can you explain it into english? thanks.."
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"Thanks for the advices.. here's the 3rd edition..
i increase the glowing section with different blue color..


now, i would like to know which style best require for submitting..
by all senior AP members suggestion..
which do you all prefer best.. from the three walls..

warmest regards'"
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Gensou Suikoden IV wall 1280x960, rookie here..

2 years 7 months ago

"Thanks for your advice.. here i change the scan more clear, is it? check it out..
need more suggestion please.. any other thing seems weird in this wall?


best regards.."
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Hi!

2 years 7 months ago

"Nice to meet you Icch' welcome to Ap' :P"
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